What do you think of my Aliens vs. Predator 3?
I saw someone else with a similar question and he got good feedback, so I’m just curious to learn about what people think of mine. I can take constructive criticism if that’s part of a review.
Title: Aliens vs. Predator: Apocalypse
Plot: A merger takes place between the two companies of Weyland Industries and Yutani Industries creating Weyland-Yutani Industries. The company in the Alien movies. At the end of ALIENS VS. PREDATOR: REQUIEM Yutani Industries got its hands on the Predator laser rifle. Ms. Yutani has her scientists study the weapon and they learn how to replicate it, helping to create the advanced technology seen in the Alien movies, but it hasn’t gotten to that point yet.
It is discovered that some Xenomorphs have been spotted in close proximity to the town that was destroyed at the end of AVP:R. Men are sent by Yutani and they capture some of them, as well as some facehuggers. They are brought to the Weyland-Yutani lab in New York City.
On the Predator home world it is discovered that Wolf is dead and track his weapon, figuring out that humans have gotten their hands on it. So the humans can’t replicate their technology the Predator named Slash is sent to recover it.
Slash infiltrates the Weyland-Yutani lab, cutting down everyone in his path. Eventually though he is tasered down by one of the security guards and is captured. Slash is locked up with his weapons taken away from him which are also studied.
Alexa Woods, the sole survivor of the team sent to Antarctica in AVP and the survivors of AVP:R are interviewed about the incident by Alan “Dutch” Schafer, and agent of Area 51, and his right hand man Mike Harrigan, a former LAPD police officer that acts as Dutch’s right hand man and is one of his closest friends. Dutch’s son John is another member of the team.
Inside Weyland-Yutani they learn about the existence of the Predalien after hearing about Dutch’s interviews with the survivors. Ms. Yutani decides to have one of her own created for military purposes and has her lead scientist Doctor Robert Stromwell in charge of the operation. Colonel Stevens is in on the operation as well. Dr. Stromwell genetically splices the DNA of one of the Xenomorphs that was captured and Slash’s creating a Predalien. Stromwell enhances the Predalien with weapons that were made from studying the Predator weapons including an arm laser launcher, a tail acid launcher, retractable blades from both arms and feet, and powerful cybernetics in the whole body to give it greater strength, speed, agility, and endurance, along with Predator type armor. To control the Predalien Dr. Stromwell puts a powerful microchip into the Predalien’s brain that was made by Hyperdyne Systems that also gave it more knowledge and tactical planning. Yutani, Stevens, and Stromwell see this as the new breed of super soldier and plan on creating more.
The Yautja on the predator home world figure that Slash has been gone for far too long so three more are sent. They are Brawl, Blade, and Tiger. Three of their best hunters. They tracked Slash’s homing beacon to the Weyland-Yutani lab and head towards Earth.
Dutch and his Area 51 team are trying to figure out as much as possible about the recent alien sightings. Dutch is bitter ever since his incident in Val Verde, blaming himself for his team being killed even though several people including Harrigan and John try to tell him it’s not his fault, but he can’t get over it.
A Weyland-Yutani employee named Emma Ripley is working on the project, but thinks it is too dangerous. Emma is an ancestor of Ellen Ripley. On the day of the testing of the Predalien super soldier all security measures are taken. When they let the Predalien out of its suspended animation Stromwell gives it orders and it complies. During the testing the Predalien stops listening to Stromwell and kills him with its arm cannon. The Predalien easily takes down the security and runs out of the room.
Brawl, Blade, and Tiger arrive by the waterfront and cloak their ship as they stealthily head towards the Weyland-Yutani lab.
While escaping the Predalien finds the captive Slash and Xenomorphs. The Predalien impregnates Slash and releases the Xenomorphs. The Xenomorphs attack the security guards that are chasing the Predalien giving the Predalien a distraction so it could escape.
When Brawl, Blade, and Tiger are right outside of the Weyland-Yutani lab that is when the Predalien bursts out and the three fight it. With its enhancements the Predalien holds it own against the three Predators easily and eventually kills Tiger, and leaves Brawl and Blade wounded. Even though the Predalien escapes Brawl and Blade go in. Inside they see the released Xenomorphs and fight them and two of them escape. Brawl and Blade proceed to find Slash, and eventually find him with his chest bulging and then several Predaliens burst from its chest. Brawl and Blade try to kill them
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but they only manage to kill one while the others escape. They themselves then leave.
Dutch and his team are called down to the Weyland-Yutani lab and Dutch speaks with Ms. Yutani, Stevens, and Emma. Yutani tells Dutch about the situation and dutch shouts that they shouldn’t have been doing that. They all agree to pool their resources to stop the menace.
Brawl and Blade contact the home world and contact one of their tribe elders named Sage. Sage tells them that backup will be sent but tells them that they have to do all they can for the situation in the time being.
The enhanced Predalien locates the other Predaliens and takes command over them. The enhanced Predalien plans to eliminate the Xenomorphs, Yautjas, and humans to take over the Earth.
Now the humans unite to fight against the Xenomorphs and Predaliens along with the Predators who try to eliminate the two races as well. This all acclimates to a final battle between
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all for races.
The Xenomorph facehuggers attach themselves to Weyland-Yutani scientist making more Xenomorphs, including a queen, that for a hive in an abandoned subway hub.
The humans. Yautjas, Predaliens, and Xenomorphs all do battle against each other. The fate of mankind will be decided.
I would love to hear reviews on my story, and to hear others’ ideas.
I would love to hear reviews on my story, and to hear others’ ideas.
August 1st, 2009 at 4:32 pm
Hi !
Great synopsis ! (I finally get to read something interesting and well written !)
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